Comments of chapter undefined of REINCARNATED AS YOUNG MASTER LU'S BRIDE

I really like this story but I think you should cut out copy paste some lines. Like that his parents died and he had to live with his grandparents and that he hated to be compared to his uncle, had been written 3 times now, word for word. Its a little confusing. Just a friendly comment 😊

certain parts of the story are quite repetitive

I like to story but way to repetitive . Getting frustrating and makes me want to give up on the story . I hope this doesn’ continue . t

i wish it wasn't so repetitive. like i keep reading the same thing over n over on every chapter. i actually like the book but this is ruining the experience

interesting story but why is it i notice that there's a few pharagraph that have been repeating over & over again? i dont think its a good thing to remind us readers the same thing you have wrote earlier (the exact same words by words)

I agree with everyone on the copy and paste.

enjoying the story but author really really really really really really really likes copy paste.[img=faceslap]

so irritating .. repetition

it's still repeating HELLO 👋

is the writer writing this story or just cut and paste because she's done it in every chapter his uncle is a genius and he grew up in his grandparents house being compared to him boo boo boo hoo I'm out of here

Really copy pasted. Can't the author even do paraphrasing? Same line for how mandny chapters now?

The repetition is annoying please but I like the story

The grammar is horrendous and should’ve been proofread and corrected. The author is very repetitious with whole pages being repeated consecutively…I’m not sure if it’s to add volume to the novel or just errors on the authors part.

yes its a lot of repeting the line just go forwardthe readers will understand it in one line no need to do it again and again..

why does these paragraphs are repeating again and again

I totally agree. It should have been a very interesting story but hss been thoroughly ruined by the repetitive story line. Very annoying n disappointing.

yup copy paste is the worst filling the word count this way is obnoxious. that said still like the story line.

will there be more chapters soon?

good story, but keep repeating the same thing over and over.