Comments of chapter undefined of Game of thrones: 3rd born Stark

i like how you got straight to the point, i like this so far keep it up

I feel like some of these wishes are wayyyyy too over kill I mean I get super soldier and spider sense like sure that’s not too op but 4 billion gold dragons ummm that would f yo the world economy most likely secondly what’s the point in getting the knowledge when your gonna have enough money to last years like some stuff I understand but it’s wayyy too much like if it was Idk a few million that he stumbled upon in an old stark tomb from his ancestors or something sure 👍🏼 makes sense who knows could happen and then using his technology and going through actual hardships instead of having everything given to him and let’s not forget the 50k warriors and 25k navy like how will he suddenly explain oh we have this many men and this extremely large navy that I “built” and kept from you ta dah and last but not least the Valyrian steel weapons he’s gotten and Excalibur like you could’ve made an interesting plot like a good 20 - 30 chapters if not more where he explores Valyria would’ve helped when you have run out of ideas and just need something to fall back onto that you already have a general idea on how to show us instead of just making out mc the usual OP from the start in all factors without any real effort other than dying once and getting these wishes :3 it would just make it more entertaining in the long run if he worked for everything instead of it just being a handout from the start

Wind and earth magic seem too bland, maybe try any affinity to all magic or Harry Potter magic, or something from anime, cuz he’s already op, so go all the way

Is it just me or does the super solder serum kinda makes things like poison immunity pointless plus if he has a medical knowledge perk what's the point of the poison immunity if it were me i would go for a spiderman serum because it has a healing factor and it increases the intelligence of the host and reactions speed much better then the S.S.S

You piled on too many perks and wishes. You want an army, work for it. Being OP is one thing, but as it stands it's just an instand god mode with unlimited resources. That kills your story right there. There's no excitement left to be had

I thank you for the chapter.

+1

Excelente aunque huebiera pedido ingenieros y medicos