Comments of chapter undefined of My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

First chapter opninon : It's a really good story and I like the idea of someone controlling minions and stuff but it would be a lot better if you could add more details to things and describe everything in more details.

Minecraft ahahaha

Never a fan of systems after reading the book "I hate systems" now I think all these systems are evil

I can tell I'm going to enjoy this story a lot, great first chapter. The only (very) minor criticism I have is that I wish the minions could have been described in more detail.

Thanks for the chap

Please just dont go premium before it gets "good" as you say. I've seen a lot of good stories die by going premium too early.

Thank you for the chapter 🥰

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Looks interesting so far

who is the kid that was bullied? Is that the mc or someone else? If he is mc who is william Hunter?

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it look interesting

Bruh this new chapter is more suck then the first one 😂 the loser aura is so strong to bahahaha

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im confused... the mc is william or what? if william is the mc, why would people laugh at him and him having a dirty locker??

I guess!

im lost, is the mc, the handsome boy? or the bullied one? or are they the same person?