Comments of chapter undefined of Riddle's Black

thank you for this chapter. This story has a lot of potential and is very well written BUT there are callbacks I can make. Already, Tom has been a naughty and vicious kid since childhood, and he's also very sneaky because he's a Slytherin. Even if he is very intrigued by his "crush", he will always have his evil side and it will take a long time for him to change his way of thinking. After all, he's used to harassing the kids at the orphanage. Also ! Voldemort's greatest fear is death, and has been since he was a child. This fear can be channeled and minimized but again, it will be difficult to remove it (it will take a new stronger fear, like the death of his love for example ah ah, long live romance!). Finally, don't make Tom fall in love too quickly, he will have plenty of time to understand these feelings, go through his desire for possession, anger... And above all Isabella is not naive because she is like Tom. Anyway thank you for this great chapter, I really like this beginning