YoanRoturier
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chapters are amazing though a tad bit shorty
Ty
Chapters have been amazing!
Pacing is fine as is, wouldnt hurt to slow down a little bit. Show more interaction with the world around erik. overal has a good consistency.
Thanks for the chapter! I think the pace is good for now, I wasn't really expecting nonstop fights in the first 16 chapters anyway.
TFTC. I honestly thing that the pace is fine, especially for a *cultivation* novel.
Obrigado pelo capitulo