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Comments of chapter undefined of I am in a new world, playing an offline RPG game

Braj_uraon
Braj_uraonLv11Braj_uraon

there's no point in changing POV

Lixon_1
Lixon_1Lv12Lixon_1

Agreed. If the translation will not get better. Changing a POV will only confuse the readers.

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VALESVV
VALESVVLv14VALESVV

I thought it was a phone game … if so wouldnt it be better to say alex’s character instead of alex or maybe when he plays their is a mind link that connects him to the game

timeturner
timeturnerLv15timeturner

grammar in this chapter needs alot of work it was very clunky and didn't flow well, plus a lot of unnecessary repetition.

Nero_Okita
Nero_OkitaLv15Nero_Okita

Sentences were horrendous . What did you translate with?