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Comments of chapter undefined of I am in a new world, playing an offline RPG game

SDsana
SDsanaLv4SDsana

you don't wanna show off but you buy a car worth millions? okay

Lazy_Pen_Master
Lazy_Pen_MasterLv14Lazy_Pen_Master

author i have some concern with this chapters grammar please address that

i_love_H
i_love_HLv4i_love_H

too much 'well'😅

Blek_Penther
Blek_PentherLv3Blek_Penther

Nice and creative :D keep writing and improving your writing and keep being creative :D

Small_Otaku
Small_OtakuAuthorSmall_Otaku

in later chapters , i only write in 3rd pov

Death_Promise
Death_PromiseLv3Death_Promise

If only the author just stick to the 3rd person PoV... The switching of POV makes my head hurts