Comments of chapter undefined of Tensura: A Cat's Life. [DROPPED]

I'm fine as long as the writing style doesn't change much, it's your story

dont change their relationship and their gender preference because i like that they are happy to change to male,female and no gender

His transformation ability to human could turn into male/female or both at once? Maybe get Yorichi memories of her combat style and kido arts to make spells/skills

If you're unsatisfied with your work and think you can do much better, then go ahead. I wouldn't mind rereading. 👍

make it so they can keep changing their gender so if the first it's Lucifer on top when rimuru is a girl then vise versa wanna see that relation because they can have fun both of them

good luck but could you make it so they can change gender whenever they want??

I like everything, I don't think there is anything critical that needs to be changed, everything is fine! Keep up the good work, Author-san!

Creí que era nuevo cap 😔

As long as it’s small changes I’m fine

This story has been dope so a rewrite would be amazing as long as it doesnt take more than a few weeks

As long as tou mentione the important changes in you next chapter cus dont feel like re reading all chaps to know some changes that aren too important

It's you fic so I say so what you want👌 but pls don't Chang the writing style 🙏

I like things the way they are but it's your choice. 👀

the normal trend is always human reincarnates or is summoned to be a hero to defeat the demon lord, then he has to go through stupid trials only to be betrayed at the end. Those are generic. Tensura? It was perfect. This is just my rambling as a lover of the anime, manga, and novel. Take it however you like.

The deaths that made him learn his lesson. The demon lord evolution, Harvest festival. Business reform. Military reforms. All these made Tensura one of a kind. You can't see its kind anywhere else. 'A reincarnated human becoming a minster and then a demon lord and actually achieve peace with humans' Come on bro. Think about it.

Umm. Not to sound like the only odd ball out of everyone here, but I think the author should pay attention to some details. I know its a fanfiction, but some things shouldn't be changed. The little girl who came to blame Lucifer for killing her father was right. If he wasn't so cocky about everything nothing bad could've happened. We all know that throughout the original light novel, nobody died and remained dead in the tempest. So my honest opinion is that you are ruining the Tensura we love. Also, need I remind you that Rimuru is actually Veldanava's reincarnation with Great Sage/Raphael/Ciel being his wife, Lucia's reincarnation? Just saying. Don't take it as a bad comment. But if you really read the novel and actually understood it, you'd realize you're actually ruining it. The novel was perfect as it is. There were no tragic characters and no plot holes. It was perfect. So at least if you want to write a fanfiction on Tensura, take it way back as possible.

Just make rinmaur a women in the revised ver sion

Thank you for the chapter