Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth: Tyrant's New Reality

Well this is more then possible in reality. Most people forget this so as long as the mc learns from this then I am fine. Also the mc didn’t do much wrong. The only 2 mistakes he made were not buying a gun the second he could and using it when needed along with letting his sister in his house at the end of the chapter.

thxs for the chap and I'm first

after reading the chapters ahead I can say that if you show patience in this chapter you will recieve it's fruit ahead

honestly if mc stays naive, this story will be very unlikeable.. also if he easily trusts people, then its just bad writing at that point aha..

well if he really wanted to be away/get rid of his family ... he should have moved to a different place especially after the "sister" came there

a system with emotions and chatty personpersonality...hmm.....not my cup of tea🗿

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I hope this is an exception to introduce the story because otherwise this mc is just too pathetic... Some of his troubles were indeed caused by his family, but others were directly his own fault for being dumb...

Br perdido

If you don't make a mc that is pleasing to the eye (at least that doesn't look stupid) in the first few chapters it will be very difficult to keep readers

Thx

I can't say I liked it, but I won't judge too early

wonderful story please make more

if i was in mc situation in that apartment i wouldve mentioned that land they owned soo fast and got her pack quick asl

Is the whole story about revenge??

ayo , poor boi suffered a lot ....hope retribution is worth it

thanks

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Dumbest MC