Matsuba_Kuroe
I don’t really understand why he’s so upset. He’s literally in a might makes right world so why is he having a tantrum over killing people?
from my view .. it's hypocrisy as he doesn't want himself to kill someone but wants others to kill his enemy/female lead which is
Yoyo99_:It can be interpreted in two ways: Firstly, he is hypocrite who feels guilty because he is unable to find any justifications of his actions. Secondly, he is good by nature doesn't want to kill someone if it is not extremely necessary.
That plot progression was too fast. shouldn't he first doubt, inquire, or learn about more details than just assuming that he was the one who did it? Who knows, maybe it wasn't the same house that he went to? Or maybe the crime happened after what he did? Maybe it was a cult that did it? who knows? anyways, im just blabbering about my dislikes for this story. Feel free to ignore my absolute mess of a critique cuz this chapter was posted 24 days ago. You can't really change what has already been done. TLDR: Dont assume too fast. also, you can't change what has already been done. Keep up the good work author!