Comments of chapter undefined of The Author Is Speechless
The Author Is Speechless
Matsuba_Kuroe
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I don’t really understand why he’s so upset. He’s literally in a might makes right world so why is he having a tantrum over killing people?
even if they caught him...which they can't, what will they even do? he can kill anyone if they come near him to harm him
Yoyo99_:You see it is a psychological response. He was not determined to kill the person as such he felt guilty and afraid of getting caught.
That plot progression was too fast. shouldn't he first doubt, inquire, or learn about more details than just assuming that he was the one who did it? Who knows, maybe it wasn't the same house that he went to? Or maybe the crime happened after what he did? Maybe it was a cult that did it? who knows? anyways, im just blabbering about my dislikes for this story. Feel free to ignore my absolute mess of a critique cuz this chapter was posted 24 days ago. You can't really change what has already been done. TLDR: Dont assume too fast. also, you can't change what has already been done. Keep up the good work author!
