Comments of chapter undefined of Hadrian Peverell in Hellboy

Don't listen just keep going.

? I thought it was a fine chapter?

the pairing is correct

prob should use author notes at end of chapters to place notices instead of placing them as a chapter onto themselves

Nah keep going just think of the possibility of restoring hadrians wall elves and magical on one side non magic( humans) on the other? Dumb idea lol

write like you want, you are the author you decide what goes on in the story. if you want to change the chapter or not it is your own decision. love the story so far.

Good story good pairing keep going

Love the story

I thought it was ok

keep going

stick with it.forget the naysayers

I thought it was a good chapter, the cut to training instead of confrontation with the people who tried to burn down the forest in the previous chapter felt anticlimactic, but this chapter was still good

👍😍

No, its how you wrote the chapter. They went from just good friends in a mentor/mentee relationship with some atraction between them to touchy feely in the snap of a finger...

the chapter was fine I liked it

Yes even though I'm late but the pairing is correct

keep the pairing

I lik it e

Autor no hagas tanto romance se siente como trampa cuando hay demasiado romance di no al ntr