Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Supreme: Sovereign of the Grand Dao

Disappointing and pathetic that the MC lost his memories and the few that were left were sealed away.

Many mistakes, you write some stuff really weird, your idea is good, but I will drop it, dont have much hope that you will fix any of your mistakes, when you cant even fix simple ones after a few months, So yeah, the idea was the only thing that brought me here, but I am just used to great grammar, and yeah, as said above, I've seen worse, but some people still like it, so continue you work, maybe use grammarly which could help bit, never used it Overall would give 3.5/5 stars

why would you do it in such a weird 1st person POV ? this totally ruins a lot of things .... ahh this is only my opinion ofc ....

oh, well come when you can beautiful nature.

Woohoo represent

from good to bad!

Can we please stop with the clif hangers it’s blowing me frfr

Don’t forget abt hanger-kun