Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Death and Domain

The story is wel written but the progression feels extremely slow. On the one had, it will be solved when you have a ton of chapters allowing for binge reading the thing and not minding as much. On the other it's makes it a slow read that going to be hard to follow on a regular or slow release rate.

I agree. I kind of regret how slow the pacing of the first chapters ended up as. I wrote the first 9 chapters a long time ago, and just this month started writing on it again. Only reason I won't rewrite is because I don't feel like it lol. At the same time, I've been enjoying writing the more recent ones, and I think they really pick up some steam after this overly-long, prologue-ish beginning. Cheers!

Thanks for the chapter Author ☺️

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thanks for the chapter