Comments of chapter undefined of Dovakin in Westeros Insert

Thanks for the chapter good job overall just needs a little bit if editing and if I may make a suggestion I say do not kill Arthur dayne or oswell whent defeat them and make them a part of his house hold it would be a waste to send them to the wall get Ned to convince Robert and he could convince the two kingsguard by saying the boy will eventually foster with him giving them the chance to teach rheagars son and he could easily use magic to defeat them without causing serious injury he could freeze their lower body in place hit them with weak lightning to stunned them like a taser or simply use a paralysis spell also don't forget in the lore of alteration in the lore you can take any metal ore and make it into another in game it works a bit differently but with this you could have home find lead or zinc or any metal on his land or he could buy cheap metal and then make it gold,silver, or platinum and white gold which they wouldn't habe in a medieval society and you might make it so once he gets a chance to look at some valyrian steel he can just make more with alteration magic

thanks for the really great chapter

Good chapter

why are they imagine when he said yes in the heavy voice from TF2

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thanks for the chapter

Nice

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Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter