Comments of chapter undefined of Harem God: Leveling Up Yanderes in the Apocalypse

Phew, I was worried I might actually have to continue for you there, it's good to have you back brother.

Hey there, just wanna give my two cents on the situation, if you’re really passionate about this book, find a way, I know you will, the way I see it you have a couple of hard choices on the table, give yourself the time after work to write, rack your brain, and pump this novel out. Because honestly, besides maybe not having Leon develop his emotions a bit more (that can be fixed in a couple of chapters) but maybe give some love to some of the other girls, while you still have parts about lindy, renia and trixie to write, giving these characters that sound fascinating (minx, mindy, Cynthia, kira, Quinn, the dragon girls, foxy, etc. P.S. go all in on the beast girls, I love them ;) ) and there is a way to mold them into the inner harem where they can help Leon and flesh out more understanding. I love this novel, it’s refreshing to read and I pray that it keeps going, and this is my opinion, bite the bullet an keep this novel as the only on so you can focus on work more, write in your free time, pound out like 10 -20 chapters in a day and release them on a schedule, don’t go for this multiple chapter a day thing, while it’s nice every couple weeks to have a mass release it isn’t healthy to just keep pounding them out. I think if you do that, taking little notes after you write just to have a plan, you can more efficiently get stuff written and as you get better, you will be able to take on more. Please take this advice, I’ve seen too many novels get dropped because life hits the authors hard, what kind of person will you be? Will you shy away, give up on an amazing novel and your dream, or will you buck up, set your mind straight, and put yourself in position to make your time manageable so you can keep writing this novel, and many more to come. I appreciate you. Give yourself the boost you need, cause you know we’ll still be here, waiting in the wings. Keep up the hard work!!!!!!!

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