Comments of chapter undefined of Vampire Devouring System
Vampire Devouring System
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Blazzing18Lv15Blazzing18
who is Scarlett there was no one named Scarlett before u up this out. there was a girl with him that was another vampire where did she go?? what the hell happened to his shadow ability and all... like what the hell happened to the store??
CyclxneAuthorCyclxne
All of that is coming. Alura's introduction early on felt forced and sudden, like she was just there as a waifu to keep readers reading. I want her to feel more like a genuine character, so I'm saving her until later on.
Blazzing18:r u going to bring her back?? I really like the way it was going to think that he was going to have someone with him like a girlfriend and they would be together and all that... I really hope u do. and one of the treasures are you should let him get a special ring so he doesn't have to Cary all those bags. and what about telepathy between that Scarlett and the rest of his servants.
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