Cyclxne
who is Scarlett there was no one named Scarlett before u up this out. there was a girl with him that was another vampire where did she go?? what the hell happened to his shadow ability and all... like what the hell happened to the store??
Re-read previous chapters. I edited them.
still copied the idea from another novel. At least could have changed the location for the key.
Did you change some parts of the book