I think Lily lost something when her accent isn't written out so I think I will return to doing it how I had always done it before this trial chapter. But I wanted to see if it seemed better this way, but I don't think so.
Welcome back! And as for me I rather enjoyed the accent being written down for us to read, it was something that I haven't seen a lot, protagonist's with strong accents that you can actually read rather than just someone stating "they have a (blank) accent.
this story has given me a taste for transhuman progression stories. anyone got any recommendations? preferably with less dark themes and longer than appears typical for the genre?