Lemon_Square
Everything in this seems to be really, REALLY rushed. There's a difference between a fast paced novel and a summery of events, and you need to slow the pace down if you want to make this a coherent story, because honestly it feels like every chapter is a DBZA Kai episode.
_Dream_God_:there is a LOT to do in skyrim, and this is modded. also, it's now a real world.