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Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of Demons, Gods and Space

000Striker000
000Striker000Lv6000Striker000

I hated everything in this chapter....😔 reasons: 1. You killed both mothers - killing off the mothers instead of putting them in a 'coma' was a bad idea, in doing so you lost a lot of potential in the story where the MC could have worked hard to 'find' the herb/medicine, 'grow' it in the 'farm' as well as study hard to learn 'alchemy' in order to 'heal' them. 2. The time-skip + coma was too long - the 9 years 'coma' was a bad idea, it shouldn't have been more than 1-3 years for the MC to wake up from his coma with the help of the "farm" awakening. It also cost the MC time he could have had to get closer to 'Ye Zeyun' & 'Xiao Ning'er' and influenced them to like him instead of 'Nie Li'. for example: • they could have explored the forests nearby looking for 'Herbs/Medicine' to cure the poisoned mothers • they could have trained their 'martial arts' and 'Swordsmanship' • they could have been studying together. • or they could just play together. • be her emotional support. 3. he didn't gain anything from the poison induced coma - let's say that the reason he was in a coma was because his growing 'Body' & 'Soul Realm' was adapting and evolving from being exposed to a Strong unique poison(Draconic Tongue Herb) and survived from it, he should at least get: • Poison/Medicine Blood & Body. • Poison/Medicine Attribute Soul Realm. • Poison/Medicine Dragon Soul Form • Poison/Medicine Detection Senses • Enhanced Alchemy Talent (Enhanced Medicinal Ingredients Understanding) • High Poison Immunity

Gomtuu76
Gomtuu76Lv4Gomtuu76

everything was. good until this chapter. the whole thing was super forced and his extended coma of 9 years is totally stupid. and you gave him a red soul realm. really?