Comments of chapter undefined of Potterverse: A Wizrard's Tale
Potterverse: A Wizrard's Tale
AstralSage
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My desire to continue reading this fanfiction has seriously been undermined with this chapter. The whole chapter is a taste of how awesome the mc will be in the (not very distant) future. We can almost understand that the mc will never really have any obstacles to cross, he drinks knowledge like a thirstless drinker. add to that a mental palace that allows him to sort and lock his memories and which also allows him to make 3D simulations in his head. In short, the perfect mix for a character without personality or character development because he will succeed anyway whatever he undertakes.
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I might have completely overlooked this aspect. Thanks for the reminder I will address his emotional closure in the next few chapters.
Nine11P2:haven't you see he seems his new life as a show he is still naive about world darkness and with how he treats his parents show that he still don't consider them real yet'
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