Comments of chapter undefined of Potterverse: A Wizrard's Tale
Potterverse: A Wizrard's Tale
AstralSage
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Wow! Just Wow! I can see one more HP FanFic giant coming by reading all the chapters available. It seems like the Author has done sufficient preparation. As they say, Perfect Preparation Prevents Poor Presentation. Good Luck, Author!
thank you for your kind words. I will try and do justice to my writing. One of the reasons for the slow updates is I have constantly researched information on the net about Britain and their education system. I am born and brought up in India with zero firsthand knowledge of Britain other than from documentaries, travel shows or works of British authors. So I don't want to assume too much and write something which results in a poor reading experience, especially for the natives.
My desire to continue reading this fanfiction has seriously been undermined with this chapter. The whole chapter is a taste of how awesome the mc will be in the (not very distant) future. We can almost understand that the mc will never really have any obstacles to cross, he drinks knowledge like a thirstless drinker. add to that a mental palace that allows him to sort and lock his memories and which also allows him to make 3D simulations in his head. In short, the perfect mix for a character without personality or character development because he will succeed anyway whatever he undertakes.
