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Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivation Supreme

Immortal_Basterd
Immortal_BasterdLv4Immortal_Basterd

the story is getting interesting, but in the characters author need to work a little hard.

LittleBastard879
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During that period, I lacked the necessary experience in the art of novel writing, compounded by my limited proficiency in the English language. This was due to my unfortunate withdrawal from formal education on account of my affliction with blood cancer during my first year in college. Consequently, I was compelled to abandon the composition of the aforementioned novel.

AstaUzumaki
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Author - the relationship seems little too rushed. Dude just got cheated by his ex and now he decides to tell his secrets to a girl within a few hours of meeting. Trust should take lot longer to build especially for some one who had it tough growing up. Things would be different, if Yuan made Yulie take a heaven oath to not leave/betray him.

DaoistwEg6t8
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Thank