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Comments of chapter undefined of Bewitched by you

Bewitched by you

Oluwakemi_20

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Miss_In_Kiss
Miss_In_KissLv4Miss_In_Kiss

the story is told from the view of many people. it made me felt the storylines are not closely linked. i thought if you tell the story using third person or first person (just choose one of the two). it will be better.

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Oluwakemi_20
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Sorry, about that I wish I had known earlier that it would a problem but I promise to improve and I will assure that everything will come together seamlessly. I just wanted to let readers see the charactes more intimately. I know now that it was a wrong approach

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Miss_In_Kiss
Miss_In_KissLv4Miss_In_Kiss

anyway, I really like the way you depict the characters and the way you portray the scenes vividly.so i will read your next novel 😁

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