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Comments of chapter undefined of NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft

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NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft

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XLullabyx
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Be careful with your writing. Most of the grammatical errors and writing flaws you have in your story. Is due to the switching back and forth between first person and third person, sometimes even second person. Choose one narrative focus, like third person and write the story from there.

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great, I just added to my library

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