pretty great. you gave the details of the area and the emotions of the characters. tho, dont forget that the people that get beaten up(cannon fodder) also have feelings, so describe how they get knocked out by the pain and how surprise they are to see someone so skilled.
you know?
Why does thor act like its such a big deal heâs taken down, he has none of his powers right now including his asgardian physiology, heâs basically just a buff human.
