Comments of chapter undefined of Methodical Magic: A Harry Potter Fanfic

Well, it's certainly a new concept, not just the same rehashed bs. /at least I think it is. Can't wait to see how you flesh out the particulars. Everything is great so far though, very articulate.

so he is sensitive to magic and any outside magic is unpleasant for him, interesting i hope the world expansion doesn't confuse you too much, the more you add the more surely you will make mistakes, and hopefully the cliche that the magic of a girl x doesn't smell bad

Author can you make a chapter where it shows MC's powers and skills.

he's giving me ravenclaw

interesting so your Hack and an enhanced magical sense has potential, and it's not that appealing thing that spoils the script

I thank you for the chapter.