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Comments of chapter undefined of Konoha’s Old Man of the Mountain

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

i just realised who ebisu is and it takes away the cool image you make him out to be in ur fic. wouldve been far better for ur mc to be an oc. cus no matter what this guy isnt the least bit threatening and hes just cartoonish

BlueTomCat
BlueTomCatAuthorBlueTomCat

The point of it was to see if I could turn him I to someone cool and not just have him be a closeted pervert.

5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

Jayxdaf
JayxdafLv4Jayxdaf

Could you post a image of Ebisu?

ThoTslayer_10l
ThoTslayer_10lLv4ThoTslayer_10l

Is ebisu the mc or the old man?