Comments of chapter undefined of A Daughter of an Ex-mafia

The chapter length is appropriate but, try to make the long paragraphs into a few short ones. A too long paragraph can disturb one's focus. Especially when several dialogues by different person are crammed together

hmm story is taking some interesting turn and I like that bird part 😂

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Great ❤

Great story

Wow.. 😍✍️📒 keep it up darling 😘

Wow great😍😍

Hey girl 🤩 good job ❤️❤️

great.☺️

Thank you dear ❤❤