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Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Devourer System

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Dragon Devourer System

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Chapter comments7

StrawTheMan
StrawTheManLv15StrawTheMan

I like the story so far! The only thing I have to say is you don’t need to put his first and last name every time you’re saying he’s speaking or introducing the character. Other than that you’ve set up a great atmosphere and I’m excited to see where the story goes!

1yr
gacob
gacobAuthorgacob

I actually forgot to update the chapters with your suggestion. Now it is done. Enjoy!

1yr

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World_Walker10
World_Walker10Lv2World_Walker10

Intriguing beginning

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AuthorTwilight
AuthorTwilightLv11AuthorTwilight

This is so interesting 👍👍

1yr
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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv14Sorenmageofmareth

loser don't flirt when you have Olivia at home .also loser they sell to nobles and work so close to town. start a mob to force the city instead of leaving notes . the gubment is getting kick backs.

1yr
Tommyshelby
TommyshelbyLv13Tommyshelby

OK it started out with a bang

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