AnonymUser
When you obviously bend over backwards to force events into such an unlikely direction then it lowers the quality of the story. A MC obviously being railroaded by the author is one of the worst writing flaws you can make imo. Luckily for your story you can use the system as a scapegoat. You did lay some groundwork but when that ground work is system hint, dumb MC, luck, system hint, dumb MC, luck, etc. then it defeats the purpose.