zigginah
Hello author, a little suggestion. I couldn't seem to ignore those little errors, especially the punctuation marks. Secondly, there are some sentences which doesn't make much sense that you might want to re-check especially the spelling and missing words in between. If you could re-read or let someone do a proofread, it would be helpful for you. So far, the plot is okay and I am sure, it will work out great. ✌✌