MasterY
Author for me your novel is very good, the only thing I find that I don't like and I think you should change is the main character's way of thinking by not wanting to approach women because he doesn't know if they have a partner. Mainly because a real life example would be that if every time you like someone you find out they have a partner and then you decide not to get close, you will be left alone because most beautiful women have a partner, so if you don't take risks you don't win. . Come on, you are not going to leave a woman you like without trying just because she has a partner. The netory in the novels is good and gives more entertainment, now don't go to put NTR that is bad and makes you stop reading novels.