The_POZ
Man, it's good to have you back at long last! I was waiting for your release. Now, regarding the story. Honestly, I'm really curious about the things with Aurora. This was a nice POV chapter. I have no complaints. But I would love some more of Aurora X MC stuff. Hope next chapter is about that. :D Anyway, take my 2 power stones. You deserve it. đđ»
While the pace of the story is messed up, your particular writing style with multiple POV make the reader want to find more about other character not minding the minor plot hole. Also your apparent cliffhangers make people want more, itâs very addictive. If you can a chapter whit a slice of life so the reader can relax with good vibes đ
Great, it's finally back, I was already a little paranoid, looking for a new chapter every day (sometimes several times a day lol). Great chapter, again I say: enriching the plot is not a bad thing, although I want it to unfold, in the long run these POVs will strengthen the plot and give us more "depth" in the story. It's again a shame to hear that you're short on time to write, but there's nothing to do except wait for your updates and help whenever possible. About the new heroine shown, I want to say that I liked it, it's an interesting theme, she being "calculating", I can imagine a possible approach on Mc's part, in a more intelligent way, showing her that he is the best choice to be her business partner/husband and this more turf-oriented type of development I like a lot, so thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next one (*TăŒT)b Ps: I read this chapter a few days ago but I didn't have time to comment.