Comments of chapter undefined of When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!
When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!
The_POZ
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Please dont make this arc too long.I have seen great stories get ruined because the author made the Mc go on a training arc or get kiddnaped and end up in a different continent and than the Mc suddenly forgot about his family and the story changed and became absolute garbage. Up until now you've done a great job with this story and I hope you continue this pace.
!!There are things that I didn't Like and can be many more in latter CHAPTERS!! 🔹But, the story is not that of a turn off. I started enjoying this story much after reading Chapter 47 I liked that chapter a lot (🤷) As for different POV'S it's good it just shows that other characters aren't there for him for only easing his carnal desires and other sort of the benefits Different POV'S are more like a World building and Character building (Development) (?). You also wanted to do some Character Development of the Other character so it is good. ReaDinG
I read that you're having trouble writing these chapters, but they seem pretty good. Like, I must say this is pretty impressive writing for someone who claims to be a noob author. Also the story is interesting. I'm really liking this twist. Eagerly waiting to see what happened to Alex. Till then(and after all), you have my Power Stones and my support. Keep it up, Author! This is a good story.
Separation Arc is where I peace out, by itself no one can write them decently, best ones are barely tolerable. in addition to that its not even written so you read it in parts one chapter a day or worse, god forbid its over 20 chapters then its pure torture and anything that might be of value previously is basically snuffed out.
