Zarathos_Lirbyther
Finn felt like a very cliche character. I mean don't tell me he's going to team with anyone without checking out how they good they actually are? If you are going to write a different fanfic, make your MC team up with someone who is actually useful to him. Someone that can teach him something, or fill some other role. As I said earlier most of this wouldn't be a problem, if he teamed up with urek and took administrators tests. But then again we would get a totally different story, and I'm not sure you can keep writing with your current pacing.
Feels kinda copied from that other tog fanfic and over time he’ll become exceptional and lean on mc as expected Anyway chapter was literally lame bruh like I said before we’re at a point where every tog fanfic author gets to and it is literally nothing special about it with this literally being the same old same old Idk I just wish things would hurry up ya know like I feel like all these chapters are a little to predictable ya know n again it doenst help that this has been rewritten numerous times over n like I feel like it might happen again aye aye Ngl would’ve bee cool if he was droppped in a couple floors higher ya know maybe floor 50 like the red tower pure oh content right there lol Anyway your story play it how u will Only here cause I’m desperate for tog content Also hope u the bets in your novel n it turns out well n the future