Sime_Kurosaki
Good jop
Your writing is good, tho I do suggest using Grammarly as there were some minor grammatical errors.
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great start but please stop with the cringey stuff
Feedback? I guess the basics. So plan out your story, don't just write blind and have fun. Most stories just kind of fizzle out because people write themself into corners and then get burnt out. I'm really enjoying your writing style though.
should throw info setting next chapsđ
Thank you for the chapter đ„°
