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Comments of chapter undefined of Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

ChaosIsNear
ChaosIsNearLv4ChaosIsNear

very original, i found myself gaining more and more interest as the story progresses, thanks for this amazing work author.

Kpnovellover
KpnovelloverLv5Kpnovellover

ok the story was good untill this devil fruit was introduced. I'm loosing interest now

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HadesOnDrugs
HadesOnDrugsLv3HadesOnDrugs

I still don't get what his fruit power is maybe it's because I don't know this whole card game and stuff. Correct me if I'm wrong 1.Mc with his fruit sets a condition or a gamble the favourability or Infavourability of the condition or gamble depends on the users or opponents luck. 2.If Mc fulfill the condition or wins the gamble he gets power up temporarily or permanently 3.Mc can store luck Is this how it works and how does he copy devil fruit powers

Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

this DF feels like some System, complicated to use it and the luck thing too like a System I would say that the jacket-jacket devil fruit is 100% better that this unnecessary complicated DF

Stud222
Stud222Lv1Stud222

Lossing interest because of devil fruit

AnAxeToGrind
AnAxeToGrindLv5AnAxeToGrind

Does the fruit double the gains he gets from the training bet? If it doesn't then why use it when you can just train and get the same amount of power without it? The temporary stuff I get but the permanent buff don't do anything if your still doing the training anyways

DespairHope
DespairHopeLv5DespairHope

Thanks for the chapter Here's a meme

Darkened7
Darkened7Lv3Darkened7

i've got to admit, although my opinion doesnt matter since this aint my story, after reading this ff ive realised that i 110% prefer a ff with a simple yet op df than a super complex doesnt seem that op df.

Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv4Man_of_culture

It just reminded me that his fruit power could turn out like Kite´s from Hunter x Hunter, gambling on what weapon he gets

CyberBlancaX
CyberBlancaXLv3CyberBlancaX

is this harem? I'm a bit curious since it kinda seems to be going down that route rn and having robin on the cover doesn't really help in that aspect

Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4Jonathan_Lam_2034

devil fruit killed the story

jasss22
jasss22Lv14jasss22

Thanks for the chapter.

Firefist_02
Firefist_02Lv1Firefist_02

Thanks for chapter

Zuch
ZuchLv5Zuch

thx for the chapter author XD XD

Leviamon
LeviamonLv4Leviamon

first

That1OtakuDude
That1OtakuDudeLv13That1OtakuDude

The devil fruit basically works like some kind of Nen power with its conditions it honestly dropped the quality of the story alot it doesn't even function like how a devil fruit would work. If you wanted to make a luck based devil fruit you could've kept the name and went with something like this He can spawn dices/cards/ anything luck related and use it to attack or defend (example - spawn giant dices to throw at people or giant cards to shield himself) And for its actual ability he can draw cards/dices and if his number is a low number his power/experience gained is lowered and high for a high number And using it in battle could've been something like an actual bet/gamble (example - I bet all my strength I will win this battle, and once he win or loses he gains some percentage of strength from his opponent depending on the high or low from his cards/dices drawn)

ruben_petit
ruben_petitLv1ruben_petit

gracia por el capitulo

Miracle_invoker_
Miracle_invoker_Lv2Miracle_invoker_

Le fruit du demon est littéralement un hatsu… La seul chose qu’il le différencie sont les conditions d’activation

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Trent01210
Trent01210Lv4Trent01210

i just thought of something but couldnt he gamble on making hus regeneration stronger or gamble on making him more immune to sea prism stone or the ocean?

J_J_K
J_J_KLv1J_J_K

Arigato