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Comments of chapter undefined of Falling for his Prisoner

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_Neko_Sensei_
_Neko_Sensei_Lv1_Neko_Sensei_

Oh man!! I wasn't expecting this

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obiparadise_purity
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So he is behind the scar that Rafael had. I feel bad that he lost his parent, I guess the pressure was too much that's why he blacked out.

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Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4Moonwriting

Rafale is suspicious!!!! is he somewhere involved in his parent's murderer?

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Yvonne_Jemutai
Yvonne_JemutaiLv1Yvonne_Jemutai

Waiting for the updates...

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hansora
hansoraLv13hansora

I couldn't write action scenes too, they exhaust my mind 😂 but, the one in this story so far is good, keep practicing it if you feel like you're not satisfied. So I guess this was the start where the Bloodsworth betrayed Frederick's family. They were supposed to be allies, right? I wonder what made them conduct such an act 🤔

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Lu_Shui
Lu_ShuiLv14Lu_Shui

It's not weird, but the "upon his return" was misleading. I had to reread the passage a few times for it to make sense. Was it return to the hotel? To home? But then the photo was taken on the last night before they return home, so I guess it was a return from somewhere else for Frederick.