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Comments of chapter undefined of Temporal Pearls

dtracers
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thank you for the chapter. it does sometimes feel like too much is happening too fast without explaining. which in some ways is a good thing but it just feels a bit chaotic and hard to follow which makes the story a bit more difficult to invest in. I'm sorry iI can't give any specific ways to change it. your English is good it just feels like some context is in your head but doesn't make it to the page

The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthorThe_Celestial_King

Actually, you are right. I increased the pacing wanting to finished this arc. Later someone point it out and I realised It Had become very confusing and too fast pace. But i have take it slow now. the pacing is back normal at the later chapters