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Comments of chapter undefined of My Triling System

Matt_Nunes
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First, let's talk about the development of this so-called "friendship", it feels unnatural to me that someone would willingly be friends with someone that threatened them not once but twice, there should be at least a chapter talking about this bonding between them, if not, this change feels too forced and quick. Now let's address the elephant in the room, the writing, it's ... a little bit odd, I hope it gets better.

Heisenberg4k
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thanks for the chapter