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I love this!! very great start I must say 💖👏
enjoyed the first chap, like the start of a great adventure
Intriguing first chapter I must say 🤔😅😁 Pretty good though!
That's an excellent way to start a story. Introducing characters, little behaviours, this is one of the most interesting premises I've read in one chapter. Gud job as a new writer~
Love the start of this story! Feels like a fairytale! 🥺💖
I am really hooked, gonna see what happens next.
wow, starting was too captivating🥰 gonna read it further💖
I am already smitten!
Keep it up!! Your writing style enchanted me🥰
Nice first chap. enjoyed the story of pops
Enjoyed a lot. Amazing.
cute..
Thank you for the chapter!
This is interesting and I hope to continue 💜
Every description is perfectly written, the first chapter started off great, I am gonna read more 😬😬😬
amazing
interesting
So much interesting it is. Fantastic...I really just don't have any lines for you...Your writing is sooo good. keep going Author. Lived it.😁😁
Awesome chapter! So cool. Hope to see more!