Comments of chapter undefined of The Wizard of The Seas

You really have a great sense of writing details and making it flow but it is also somewhat of a downside as I feel the pace is slow for a chapter. One more thing, the sudden POV change took me a surprise. I suggest try to reduce exposition before changing or you could try to describe the scenery of the character to changed POV to before stating what they're doing. Though another thing you could do is write it on Limited 3rd person view.