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Comments of chapter undefined of Zero Evolution Online

ExPandaLord
ExPandaLordLv15ExPandaLord

So I so in on the the previous chapters you were wondering to make this a only one fmc or a Harem with only sex partners. and no offense but I think a Harem for only sex partners would be terrible. and it would be better to only focus on one fmc or no romance at all.

ExPandaLord
ExPandaLordLv15ExPandaLord

if you want to do a Harem that's fine if the mc actually loves to women. but if your only doing it for the sex then this is just a r-18 novel and it will make it hard to get invested in the characters or actually Care. but that's just my opinion.

Playful_Dragon
Playful_DragonAuthorPlayful_Dragon

YEAH I AM FOCUSING ON ONLY TABITHA.

Playful_Dragon
Playful_DragonAuthorPlayful_Dragon

IN SHORT, SHE IS PETTY. JAMES IS AT THE RECEIVING END OF THAT PETTINESS.

Playful_Dragon
Playful_DragonAuthorPlayful_Dragon

Yeah. I think I said this earlier but I am really confused about where I should take the novel. If you've been following, the first premise was a magical world where there is no influence exerted by science. But I later changed it to a VR genre. I am not sure that's why I usually end a chapter with a request asking for comments and whatnot. Therefore your comment is appreciated but how will you suggest I change it?