Comments of chapter undefined of The Alpha From The Aurelius

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Missing hook. Tension in atmosphere is not fully developed. Although it can be improved to greater extent

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Hope you get the contract soon. Good luck.

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The princess is coming!

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I have started reading your novel, your writing is great🌟

this is a good introduction so far! I love it! Will read chapter 1

its exhilirating! ❤️❤️

I'm mesmerized, the setting of the story gave me the clear picture in my imagination. The usage of fantasy element as in magic spells, promise values, castle and kingdom have been used properly.

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I can feel the angst already why it's getting sad even with so much action?

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I finally get the time to have a proper read on this and I'm more than blessed to have another proper shot!!

The beginning of the story is very interesting. the attack on fortified forts, on the same time having theirs princess, the happy emotions, the tensed plight ... all are just perfectly articulated ..Such beautiful writing this is. I appreciate your talent..

The preview and theme seems exciting so let's go.