Comments of chapter undefined of Kaitou Academy

something is not quite right with your novel first of all the Mc is but a child.. the hospital is to lax, a child convinced police officers to let a suspicious suspect off by simply telling then his good deeds. sentence construction is poor it hard to put your self in the mcs shoes, he's to rational without power in world of power trying to save people with card tricks. the idea is full of potential but so poorly written. sometimes even the dialogs are hard to follow.. then there's the question marks...