Comments of chapter undefined of m....

I really liked this first chapter and can't wait for what happens next!!

Well drafted chapter, though I felt emotions of FL were kind of pushed behind by the end of chapter. (during information probing with Dina) However punctuation is missing at numerous places. We don't know how FL looks like, or the castle is, the festival where she went (tho that's minor matter) but in lesser words the atmosphere can be developed well. We can't really imagine much from key words like Duke and dutchess.