InstaMoist
well... I don't know what I just read.... it's just confusing....
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why should you apologize? anyway, the writing was good! but I have to say that this was a bit confusing!
I edited it again to make it better. I hope you enjoy it.
Good, but his her is the problem
usage of his/her is sometimes incorrect and it makes the chapter confusing.
Why in the name of god would you start out with a side character’s POV? I thought it was the MC talking the whole time. 😑
Confusing to say the least
