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Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon of Lust: If you want to live, keep me entertained

SirC
SirCLv4SirC

well... I don't know what I just read.... it's just confusing....

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Subtorren
SubtorrenLv1Subtorren

why should you apologize? anyway, the writing was good! but I have to say that this was a bit confusing!

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InstaMoist
InstaMoistAuthorInstaMoist

I edited it again to make it better. I hope you enjoy it.

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noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Good, but his her is the problem

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Lucien1
Lucien1Lv13Lucien1

usage of his/her is sometimes incorrect and it makes the chapter confusing.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Why in the name of god would you start out with a side character’s POV? I thought it was the MC talking the whole time. 😑

Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv3Master_Celestial

Confusing to say the least