Comments of chapter undefined of Justiciar - Lord of the Mysteries

I advise you to start over in another job because the beginning of your work was wrong. It made the hero jump from sequence 9 to sequence 5 in a few chapters. I, in my humble opinion, start over in a new job and try to make the hero instead of being noble. Try to make him the son of Duke Negan, or try to make the hero a relative of the Hall family, to which Audrey Hall belongs. . . As for the hero, I think that you make him take another path, such as the path of the beast or the path of the mystery seeker in which the hidden sage is located, or you can make the hero follow the path of judgment as I did here, but try to make the method of promotion logical and do not rush the promotion process and try to make the hero travel to different countries and Different regions, for example you have Rust Bay, the Empire of Visac, the Republic of Antites, the Kingdom of Finnaputer or the Kingdom of Lenoburg . . I can summarize your mistakes in the following order . 1 The hero is given a very strong identity, which is the identity of the prince . 2 I made the hero upgrade from sequence 9 to 5 quickly and illogically. Usually, the authors take 10 to 20 chapters to allow the hero to advance. During this period of 10 to 20 chapters, you will find the hero collecting potion ingredients, creating a cooperative relationship with different characters, or finishing some The tasks that interest the hero . 3 The hero hasn't ventured enough after becoming Sequence 6, hasn't ventured into the South Continent, or faced members of the Rose School of Thought, and hasn't encountered dangerous situations that make him more cautious. . 4 The hero did not try to attend various gatherings of unusual people 5 You did not think about the plot completely, and this is very wrong. You, as an author, must have a clear picture of the future chapters, within the limits of 6 to 8 chapters, so as not to be surprised one day that you no longer have any inspiration. You must have a clear picture of the events that will It will appear in the next chapters

I liked this fanfic but i agree that the advancement in sequences was very fast. I hope you will atleast consider rewriting this as there are already very few lotm fanfics out there. And on your current situation i can only say that everything will get better, this is a temporary hardship that you will definitely come out of Mr. Author Sama.

Hope you don't drop tho

NOOOOOO I really liked this fanfic......sigh

More pls

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